User talk:Tbookbinder/sandbox
1. First, what does the article-draft do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way? The article give specific conversations on specific topics. I was really impressed with the citations of the article and how certain words were supplied with a link, as well as how each sentence had a different citation. The movements between phrases were also impressive, especially when an image was put as a reference along with a location in the text.
2. Are there sections in the article that seem unnecessary? Is anything off-topic? The article is about soy sauce generally, there are many subjects that help to extensively describe soy sauce's attributes and uses. 3. Does the article focus too much on negative or positive information? Explain. I do not believe the article is biased at all. From what I have read it seems very factual and informative rather than opinionated. Remember, neutral doesn't mean "the best positive light" or "the worst, most critical light." It means a clear reflection of various aspects of a topic.
4. Does the article draw conclusions or try to convince the reader to accept one particular point of view?Are most statements in the article connected to a reliable source, such as textbooks and journal articles? Or do they rely on blogs or self-published authors? The article does not draw conclusions that guides the reader to accept one point of view. Each statement is in fact connected to a reliable source such as text books and articles. There are not many, if any at all that refer to blogs or self-published authors.
5. Are there any changes you would suggest the author apply to the article? Why? Though the article is factual, I feel as if there is a bunch of facts on the page. I would suggest making the article a bit more personable, so that the reader may feel easily engaged.
6. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know! I would definitely like to add more citations and links within words throughout my article. This article did very well with backing up there given information with reliable sources.
7. Write your name followed up by "MannyT1629 (talk) 03:55, 28 October 2019 (UTC)" Manny TorresMannyT1629 (talk)
I have made a few changes to wording and a labeling mistake in a photo. Thank you for the thorough feedback. Tasneem Bookbinder Tbookbinder (talk) 15:35, 4 November 2019 (UTC)