User talk:Tdhenson86

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Peridon and MacAddct1984, could you please take a look at the new page I created? Let me know what you think. Thank you! Tdhenson86 (talk) 21:17, 20 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on the new article[edit]

It certainly looks better. I'm no expert on whether it will pass the test of notability, but the news article is a good start. Just remember that "Trivial or incidental coverage of a subject by secondary sources is not sufficient to establish notability", and the other links are all by primary sources related to the school. I would suggest trimming the lead to just one or two sentences and moving most of the information about its accreditation to the history section. (You can reply here, I'll keep an eye out) -- MacAddct1984 (talk • contribs) 22:51, 20 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you MacAddct1984!!! I have made the changes. My hope is to produce a good article. Currently, I have the news article and the Canadian government webpages as third-party sources. I will add more as I am able. Thanks again! Tdhenson86 (talk) 22:55, 20 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]