User talk:Techdream977

Your submission at Articles for creation: Techdream977 (April 8)

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Eagleash (talk) 08:18, 8 April 2023 (UTC)

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Concern regarding Draft:Ashok Dhakal

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:04, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding User:Techdream977

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 09:02, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Chhiring Sherpa

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A tag has been placed on Chhiring Sherpa, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Chhiring Sherpa

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You may want to consider using the Article Wizard to help you create articles.

A tag has been placed on Draft:Chhiring Sherpa, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Neutral?

I see that at Draft talk:Chhiring Sherpa you wrote "The draft maintains a neutral and objective tone, refraining from promotional language". If you honestly think that a page filled from start to finish with language such as "has left an indelible mark on the world of cinema", "Her remarkable talent and dedication", "her exceptional talent", and so on and so on and so on... "maintains a neutral and objective tone, refraining from promotional language", then you are unlikely ever to be able to write in a way acceptable for Wikipedia. The whole page was written in blatant marketing-speak. JBW (talk) 09:21, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

I appreciate your feedback and concern regarding the tone of the draft. I apologize if the initial version of the article appeared to have promotional language. I understand the importance of maintaining a neutral and encyclopedic tone on Wikipedia.

In response to your observations, I am fully committed to addressing this issue and improving the draft to align with Wikipedia's guidelines. I acknowledge that the language used in the original draft may not have met the standards for encyclopedic content. To rectify this, I will thoroughly revise the article to ensure that it presents factual information in a neutral and objective manner.

I will remove any language that may be perceived as promotional and focus on providing well-referenced, balanced, and encyclopedic content that adheres to Wikipedia's content guidelines. Your guidance is valuable, and I'm here to work collaboratively with the Wikipedia community to create a suitable entry for Chhiring Sherpa that meets the site's standards.

Once again, thank you for your patience and assistance in this matter. I will make the necessary revisions and resubmit the draft for your consideration.

Sincerely,

techdream977 Techdream977 (talk) 04:34, 11 September 2023 (UTC)