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Gabriele Corcos[edit]

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October 2015[edit]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Gabriele Corcos (October 8)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 04:20, 8 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Reference errors on 13 October[edit]

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Your article Draft:Gabriele Corcos[edit]

Hello, Thetuscangun, and welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed some issues with Draft:Gabriele Corcos that would prevent it from passing its next AfC review which you submitted it for. I corrected some of the problems with the draft, but it still needs some more work.

The most important thing the draft needs is inline citations to reliable sources (newspapers, magazines and books are usually best; blogs are no good) that are independent of him (so nothing from Food Network, his employer, counts) and which establish Gabriele Corcos's notability by devoting significant coverage (at least a few paragraphs) to him. I found a couple sources that can contribute towards establishing his notability, but you should try to find, and then cite in the article, at least one more.

Inline citations are also needed to prove facts asserted in the draft article. Again, I found and added citations for a number of facts in the article, but there are many that still need citations. I marked some of the places where proof needs to be shown with ^{[citation needed]} tags, but there are places I didn't mark that need proof cited, too. Anything that can't be cited to a third-party source — someone other than Corcos himself — may need to be removed entirely.

There's also some of what we call "non-encyclopedic language", for example where it says "In 2001 Corcos's life changed when he met and fell in love with his current wife, Debi Mazar." That reads more like a personal reflection. I left it alone for now in case there's a source somewhere that uses similar wording that can be quoted, but I changed some of the wording elsewhere in the draft.

Not a big deal, but it isn't necessary to use a pipe | in intralinks when what's on both sides of the pipe is identical.

The list of episodes of Extra Virgin should be moved into its own article, but that's a low-priority issue.

Finally, I highly recommend you add information about Corcos's involvement in the fight against hunger, including his appearance on Chopped in support of a hunger charity, his involvement with Bertolli in support of another hunger charity, and his family's participation in the experiment of eating on a poverty-line budget. Here is a source I found for you about that.

Good luck with your draft, and feel free to ask me questions either here, on my talk page, or at Wikipedia:Teahouse. If you ask here, be sure to copy and paste [[User:GrammarFascist]] into your question so that Wikipedia will tell me someone's talking to me. —GrammarFascist _contribs ^talk 00:02, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gabriele Corcos has been accepted[edit]

Gabriele Corcos, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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LaMona (talk) 02:05, 29 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]