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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (March 10)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by QuicoleJR was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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QuicoleJR (talk) 18:48, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Tom83110! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! QuicoleJR (talk) 18:48, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi QuicoleJR, thanks for reading my draft.

As a new user, I would like to know if you think I can modify the draft to match Wikipedia's standards ? If yes what should I do precisely ? I tried my best to source my data and to only develop informations from a neutral point of view but it looks like I missed something. If you feel like the notability of the subject is not strong enough to create an article it's another thing and I won't try to update my draft. Thanks for your precious help,

Tom Tom83110 (talk) 06:58, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]