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Talk:Human rights in Israel#Recent_trend_version_2

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Dispute overview

I added content here to the article Human rights in Israel and it got deleted. The objections were that it's SYTHN, OR and RECENTISM. The content is also copied with footnotes to the Talk page section above linked.

Have you tried to resolve this previously?

Last month, after I contributed part of this content to the same article and it got deleted, I asked for comments on the (same) Talk page of the article (in the section immediately preceding the present Talk page section, here). I received comments on the Talk page at that time and I made changes according to the comments.

How do you think we can help?

Striving for objective comment based on WP rules.

Summary of dispute by Icewhiz

I'll start out by noting that by independent measures, Israel has actually been improving in the Democracy Index, see Haaretz or the raw data at EIU Democracy Index - which has Israel improving from 7.28 in 2006, to 7.79 in 2017.

As for the passage in question, there are a number of problems. The different statements in the paragraph are SYNTHy connections to one another. The opening sentence makes a generalization of "Israeli citizens" - while Israeli citizens as a whole (with the exception of a very small minority) do not support this statement. HROs criticize in general - if it is not specific, then it is NOTNEWS. However, this whole preamble of a sentence is just a SYNTHy introduction to ACRI. The sentence on ACRI is full of puffery - and worse - is UNDUE as it is sourced to ACRI itself and not to any serious SECONDARY coverage of ACRI. Finally the last bit of "has been called "constitutional retrogression" by some legal analysts." is SYNTHy to the previous two, uses "some" in a weaselly manner, and is actually on something else all together - - the 1992 "constitutional revolution" and current trends to reverse some of this unilateral action by the Supreme court.

If the ACRI report were significant (which is what this started out with - Revision as of 02:06, 10 May 2018 - the other bits got added around it), one would have expected robust WP:SECONDARY coverage of it. As it is - none has been presented.Icewhiz (talk) 07:57, 10 June 2018 (UTC)

@EnglishEfternamn: - Israel has a plethora of organizations that cover human and civil rights. They all issue multiple reports per year. If this were a significant report - one would have expected it to have been reported on, widely, in a WP:SECONDARY manner. It seems this has not happened - which would indicate it is not significant.Icewhiz (talk) 19:31, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
@Icewhiz The Indices of Freedom in the World makes the differentiation between the areas part of Israel that aren't disputed and Israeli settlements on Palestinian lands. It's well known that Palestinian areas have undergone to say the least, disturbing compromises to freedom and human rights. So much so that Obama/Kerry's support of UN Resolution 2336 was made quite known (Much to the ire of his political critics, though I don't want to expand further on that). If the Freedom in the World indices indicate these compromises and ACRI indicates these compromises, what stops pointing this out from being authoritative?EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 19:46, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
There is no indication that ACRI is accepted as authoritative. It is a small NGO with a very particular political viewpoint (opposed to the present day government of Israel). There are, literally, over a dozen of similar NGOs - there is no particular reason to favor this particular NGO. I will note that ACRI was referring to the situation without the West Bank - and the supposed limiting of civil society organizations - which ACRI is part and parcel of - which places ACRI in a bit of a conflict of interest.Icewhiz (talk) 19:53, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Association_for_Civil_Rights_in_Israel --
"ACRI is a member of the International Network of Civil Liberties Organizations (INCLO), a network of 13 independent human rights organizations around the world with the aim of advancing human liberty in their respective countries.[22] The American Civil Liberties Union (ACLU) is among the oldest of the 13."
It's just my asking, would this put the group in the realm of low notability?EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 19:59, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
It's a notable organization, sure. It used to be the "only game in town" - but that has changed in the past 20-30 years. They employ some 30 people - similar is size to some of the competing NGOs. To a large extent - this is a political advocacy group (and this particular report has been written by their director of Policy Advocacy - which quite clearly labels it as political advocacy as opposed to a more professional report), and in this case commenting on issues that directly affect them (limitation/disclosure on foreign donations to NGOs) - if no one has picked this up for coverage, it is simply insignificant. Icewhiz (talk) 20:08, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
Hold the phone, I wouldn't say that that alone would make it an insignificant report, especially given the notability of the source. Nobody deems Freedom In The World reports to be insignificant, even if they're ignored by mainstream media. Again, not trying to imply bias, just asking for clarification, since many of the indicators of notability do exist here. What corroborating sources, hypothetically speaking, would in your opinion suffice to have the reference? EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 20:23, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
Freedom house reports (at least their main ones - e.g. the country rankings) are always picked up by media. ACRI is also not of the caliber of Freedom house. Two to three strong independent mainline sources (say - Haaretz and YNET for local Israeli coverage, or a local Israeli paper and a mainline international outlet (NYT / Wapo / Telegraph / BBC / etc etc.)) would perhaps be sufficient here.Icewhiz (talk) 20:30, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
Quantity of media coverage or lack thereof doesn't automatically determine notability and authority of a source. But that being said, what prompts you to feel you can trust the authority of Haaretz, and its relatively optimistic take on civil society in Israel rather than ACRI and its relatively pessimistic take? @NYCJosh , maybe you too could tell me your position as to how you feel the source in question is essential for the article. Regards! IF you folks don't hear from me for some hours it's because I went off Wiki for the night. ADDED: I say that because sometimes I deal with people who are online all the time and get annoyed if someone else they're talking to isn't. EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 01:48, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
You haven't read Haaretz recently - their editorial line agrees with ACRI- very much so (in terms of Israeli media - Haaretz is hard left, with only non mainstream (e.g. +972) media to the left of it). What I am looking for is someone else, who is not ACRI, reacting, ,mentioning, citing, covering, or analyzing the ACRI report. By seeing what outside sources choose to cover from this report we can determine what is significant (if at all) to include.Icewhiz (talk) 20:58, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
I see, you're saying it's a matter of having the coverage of this issue not hinge on one source alone or all the eggs in one basket. It's not unreasonable to not want to feel like there's just one leg to stand on for coverage of something. Three additional sources, I'm not sure if that's what's needed, again it would depend on who is saying what. We all know there IS a human rights issue there that's rearing its ugly head, but I certainly want to get this right in terms of what the page would be able to say about it. @NYCJosh , can you direct me to a news source that suggests the ACRI report cover a recent and concerning development? Still like to hear from you when you can respond, though I know the weekend is coming and people get busy. Regards!EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 21:08, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
EnglishEfternamn - not a single source has been presented by NYCJosh that covers the ACRI report. NYCJosh has found other sources addressing human right concerns by critics of Israel (while not balancing these with criticism of the critics) - but these do not address ACRI's 2018 document by their Policy Advocacy director. The connection of the Maryland Law Review (in regards to the balance of power between parliament and the supreme court) is particularly tangential.Icewhiz (talk) 08:47, 20 June 2018 (UTC)
@Icewhiz: While I maintain the ACRI source is notable and complies with the pertinent WP policies, what's your thoughts on having us draft a contribution that incorporates it, but balances out the other sources? Regards. EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 17:05, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
Well, I disagree (and would want to see someone, anyone, referring to this public advocacy document), but I see I am in minority here. If we are to include ACRI - then without the SYNTH tie ins - lets focus specifically on what we take from ACRI.Icewhiz (talk) 17:34, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
I'm going to be on the lookout for supporting sources. I would concur that SYNTH needs to be avoided, perhaps we could stick to the simple coverage of "XYZ says ABC, conversely ZYX contends that Z". NYCJosh is that something you would be good with seeing? EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 18:09, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
@Drmies: as for "some citizens" - yes that is correct for a very small number of citizens, incorrect generally. My concern with the ACRI report is lack of coverage of it in any secondary source - ACRI is one of several organizations, and this particular document is by their policy advocacy section (which also raises concerns). As for numbers on "how good Israel is" -- Democracy Index is a more established organization than ACRI, and actually has SECONDARY coverage on its ratings (and critique thereof - Haaretz's headline being "Analysis A High-functioning Illiberal Democracy: Explaining Israel's Ranking in the Global Democracy Index") - the issues here isn't numeric - but that this is an assessment by an independent organization. The Maryland Law Review is SYNTH - read it - it discusses a totally different issue (regarding the balance of power between the Israeli supreme court and the Israeli Parliament - which in the 90s swung in a certain direction (in the "constitutional revolution") and that there is talk (+draft legislation) to move a bit back). All that being said - could you take a look at the "Proposed changes by participants" section below? Despite the recent editing on the page (not by me!) - I think that we've made progress at DRN.Icewhiz (talk) 21:22, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Summary of dispute by Zero

Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

Summary of dispute by Shrike

ACRI view by itself is not notable and hence WP:UNDUE if it was notable it would be reported by major secondary WP:RS therefore it shouldn't be included in the article.--Shrike (talk) 10:18, 13 June 2018 (UTC)

Summary of dispute by יניב הורון

Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

Summary of dispute by Drmies

This started with a modest, modest note by NYCJosh a while ago, and I am puzzled that two editors are getting so defensive over a brief and factual set of statements in the middle of the article. Icewhiz complains that the first sentence is SYNTHY--well, "Israeli citizens and human rights organizations have criticized the Israeli government..." simply turns out to be a true statement, verified by the Guardian article: it mentions that "Thousands of Israelis marched in Tel Aviv", verifying "citizens, and verifies "human rights organizations" with "Under the banner of the "Democratic Camp", a coalition of organisations and prominent individuals, the marchers heard speakers lambast the Israeli government, singling out the rightwing foreign minister, Avigdor Lieberman, who is seen as threatening Israel's democracy", etc. (Note: the article is here. I know what Icewhiz is going for: they're trying to sneak in a reading of "Israeli citizens" as meaning "EVERY SINGLE ISRAELI CITIZEN". That cannot stand. They also talk about puffery: I know puffery, I've made thousands of edits removing puffery, this is no puffery. And if the ACRI is a notable club, and if the Guardian article establishes that such clubs criticize the government etc., then this is valid. Finally, that the article from the Maryland Law Review is SYNTHed into it is unproven, unless Icewhiz manages to prove that "This trend" does not have the claims from the previous sentence as an antecedent. The best Icewhiz can hope for is that it is somehow deemed that the ACRI is not reliable or whatever, and that that one sentence can thus be removed. But we include reports by organizations like the SPLC, so this shouldn't be different in principle.

One more thing: יניב הורון is seriously edit warring. They revert and point to a talk page discussion where they aren't participating, then they revert again and point to a DR conversation where they are not participating. That's not cool. Drmies (talk) 21:12, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Icewhiz, why do you feel the need to cite some numbers on how good Israel is? That has nothing to do with any of this, but it suggests that you are partisan here, with your innuendo that we shouldn't include the criticism because the country ticked up in the ratings. Drmies (talk) 21:14, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Geez Louise...I must have missed that little part. The undue reversions that is. Thank you very much for bringing that up Drmies.EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 23:52, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Talk:Human rights in Israel#Recent_trend_version_2 discussion

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Initial comments

Evening, all. I'm EnglishEfternamn, one of the volunteers on WP:DRN. You can call me "EE" for short, as most of the posters on the site do. Looking over the spar over this content on the talk page as well as in the user talk pages of the users involved, it's pretty clear to me this is complicated. That's probably why some four days have passed without much volunteer attention. It's almost needless to say that this day and age the issues surrounding Middle Eastern politics and Israeli politics in particular are touchy subjects and the potential for controversy is explosive.

That being said, let's start by looking at the authority of the source in question. NYCJosh points out that the organisation assessing the state of civil society in Israel is large, influential, and established. I'm not taking sides, that would be imprudent obviously and I'm not supposed to do so...again obviously. My initial thoughts are simply that the facts pointed out by NYCJosh would at the very least imply the authority of the source. The burden of proof is on no one just yet, I'm just asking for opposition and the arguments for it. Why, the question I pose to the opposition involved in this content dispute, does an established report of concern over civil society in Israel not warrant mention? Regards, and I hope we can get a dialogue going that will benefit all parties. Be civil, be concise, and always reach out to MOI if you have any questions or concerns. EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 19:22, 14 June 2018 (UTC)

Response by NYCJosh

1. ACRI is Israel's oldest and largest civil rights organization ("Israel's equivalent of the ACLU" https://972mag.com/attempts-to-bypass-high-court-could-end-protection-for-israels-minorities/134765/ ). As such, its comprehensive report on a major trend is notable per WP. It is also a RS per WP, unless the editor in opposition finds some other RS to contradict the factual assertions in the report.
2. The following ACRI report, which I would also like to include, details recent Israeli govt initiatives to constrain the power of the Israeli Sup Ct to review the conformity of legislation with the "basic law" of Israel, to reduce the power of Israel's independent Attorney General to investigate official wrongdoing, to stifle civil society organizations that are seen as critical o the govt, to silence criticism of the govt by Israel's public broadcasting service, etc. etc. https://www.acri.org.il/campaigns/report2017en/ (first section "Shrinking of Democratic Space")
3. The contribution also cites several other major independent sources, including The Nation (US) and The Guardian (UK) as well as international human rights organizations that describe the trend described by the ACRI report.
4. Given the multi-pronged govt attack against Israeli democracy, this contribution should be much longer. But I didn't want to be accused of an undue weight violation. But if it were longer, then additional independent sources could be added for each issue: Israeli govt initiative against judicial review by Sup Ct, Israeli govt attack against freedom of conscience of visitors to the country who hold views critical of policies of the govt, etc. The existence of these govt initiatives is widely covered by the Israeli press (including in major English language publications) and no one seriously denies this. What the ACRI report does nicely is present them together in a way a historian writing 100 years from now would, or the way an encyclopedia writing at a thousand feet should.
5. The first sentence is a topic sentence for the paragraph so it necessarily is broader. WP would make for a sorry read if paragraphs could not have topic sentences. The allegations in the sentence are fully supported by the remaining sentences.
6. "Israeli citizens protested" It doesn't say all or most citizens did. How else should it be phrased when thousands protest and "Tel Aviv sees largest protest in years." Seems like a frivolous issue.--NYCJosh (talk) 16:33, 16 June 2018 (UTC)

Good to hear from you, you explain the position well as well as outline why you feel the ACRI source is within WP policy to use. You've clearly put a lot of work and thought into your prospective addition to the site and I applaud you for those efforts. Also thank you for coming in to voice your position, I realize that one a weekend (and a holiday weekend for many), it can be hard to be prompt on such responses. Folks, I mention this again because I've moderated cases in the past where some participants want immediate responses, so that's the only reason I keep mention it; don't want anyone to feel rushed.
That said, I'll reiterate that I think it's almost common knowledge that Israel is undergoing a human rights issue, so much so that the White House administration of the 43rd president had alluded to it, the 44th directly addressed it, and the United Nations has directly addressed it. That's not the whole issue for the context of this discussion however: the central issue here is whether there is the right kind of information to include this in the article, along with the ACRI report. If it looks as though there is, then it should of course be included in the article, but in a manner favourable to all participants. Thus, in a manner in which the participants feel is consistent with WP policy.
@NYCJosh: with that, I'd like to ask of your if you could help me out; for analysis of the specific details, which WP policies are you citing directly to justify the contribution and along with which independent sources outside the ACRI study? Thanks much, and regards, fellows! EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 22:44, 16 June 2018 (UTC)
Thanks for your thoughtful and prompt response, EnglishEfternamn.
In answer to your questions, ACRI is notable in its own right, as Icewhiz concedes. Here are sources in addition to ACRI that I had cited. [1] [2] [3] [4] and [5]
Here are some additional sources discussing the trend--the erosion of democratic rights and institutions in Israel in recent years.[6] ("...they include a law that in effect allows Israeli communities to exclude Arab families; another that imposes penalties on Israelis advocating a boycott of products made in West Bank Jewish settlements; and proposals that would subject the supreme court to greater political oversight.") and [7]
I found these very quickly googling "erosion of democratic rights Israel." These are sources reviewing the general phenomenon and many other sources are available.
For specific issues, e.g. the government's rollback of the ability of the Supreme Court of Israel to review and overturn legislation when it violates the "Basic Law" of Israel, the refusal of entry to Israel by visitors who have some views at odds with those of the Israeli govt, etc., there are many sources available. --NYCJosh (talk) 14:39, 17 June 2018 (UTC)
Looking good at first glance. I'm going to familiarize myself a little better with the sources you provided and will attempt to get back to you shortly with my take on this. Thus far though, at the very least, it does seem as though you're doing your homework on this. Regards!EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 15:29, 17 June 2018 (UTC)
Still readin', by the way, will attempt to have further comment soon. EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 17:51, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
Alright, having better looked over the links and information provided, it would appear there is sufficient cause to regard NYCJosh's contribution as legitimate, as per WP policies on reliable sources, notability, and verification. ACRI is not only notable in this context, but specifically salient; the coverage of their assessments are pertinent, and the independent sources cited by NYCJosh are also relevant (I'd be a little less inclined to think so if they were not included here).
I would ask Icewhiz if the contribution with these sources is acceptable,. If not, what changes would Icewhiz or other users involved in the dispute like to see. Icewhiz I know you'd stated that a small handful of sources backing the ACRI information would better reflect what you felt could work out? EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 00:48, 20 June 2018 (UTC)

Proposed changes by participants

Adding this new section for neatness and moving the discussion on to proposed changes. I ask participants to place further comments here. EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 18:10, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

I just wanted to see what you guys would think of a draft along the lines of:
"ACRI states that the situation on civil rights and civil society is worsening, with the Israeli government moving to oppose moves by the judicial system, as well as civil activists to address these concerns. Not all surveyors of the recent human rights situation in Israel are in agreement, however, with other outlets, such as Haaretz, attesting to improvements with regards to Israel's democratic development."
Of course, the final contribution (in the context of this particular content dispute) would not use that exact wording; this is just a very basic blueprint of what I think could be an end result that everyone could be ok with. My concern at this moment would be how we touch up on the opposing assessments of some of the organisations mentioned. One thing I find is that when articles go along the lines of "X says 1, however, Y says 2", the reader's brain has a way of perceiving group Y as having the last, therefore correct word. We've got to be very careful about crossing over into POV lines without really realising it. Regards.EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 22:01, 22 June 2018 (UTC)
It's not Haaretz, it is EIU (Haaretz is reporting on). I also suggest we follow Josh's wording on ACRI - which isn't saying the HR situaiton is worsening but is rather concerned on government "attacks" on so called gatekeepers. How about:
An ACRI December 2017 report presented what ACRI views as examples of persistent Israeli government attack against Israeli democracy, human rights, the right to protest, respect for the underlying value of equality, and the liberties of political, social and ethnic minorities.[1] However, Israel's overall score on the 2018 Economist Intelligence Unit's Democracy Index is 7.79, or 30th, with high scores on most categories with the exception of civil liberties.[2].Icewhiz (talk) 22:23, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Note - not sure what the best place to bring this up is, but if need be, you can add me as a participant to this DRN.Volunteer Marek (talk) 21:28, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

References

  1. ^ Association for Civil Rights in Israel, "Overview of Anti-Democratic Legislation Advanced by the 20th Knesset," (ACRI report published December 2017)
  2. ^ Analysis A High-functioning Illiberal Democracy: Explaining Israel's Ranking in the Global Democracy Index, Haaretz, Anshel Pfeffer, 7 Feb 2018
Thank you Drmies for your thoughts.
EnglishEfternamn, I agree with your point regarding the danger of concluding with a sentence that undermines the previous contents of the paragraph, as Icewhiz's proposal seems to do. My concern with both your and Icewhiz's proposals is that you leave out the sources I included besides ACRI. I am not sure why they were jettisoned. I stand by my original wording. I would also like to add the following additional sentences:
Additional ACRI reports voice their concerns regarding recent Israeli government initiatives to undermine democratic institutions of Israel, including constraining the power of the Supreme Court of Israel to review the conformity of legislation with the "Basic Laws of Israel," reducing the power of Israel's independent Attorney General to investigate official wrongdoing, stifling civil society organizations that are seen as critical of the government, and constraining independent investigation and criticism of the government by the Israel Broadcasting Authority.[1] A number of additional independent news sources have also noted Israeli government's efforts in recent years to erode democratic rights and institutions in Israel.[2] [3] [4]
Also, immediately following the phrase, "Israel's oldest and largest civil liberties organization," I would like to add the following footnote in support: [5] --NYCJosh (talk) 23:27, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
NYCJosh, I completely agree with your assessment of the situation and agree that the final contribution has to reflect what's going on, but I say with both hesitation and resolve to be objective that describing the Israeli gov't as "undermining democratic institutions of Israel" in "Wikipedia's voice" may compromise NPOV. Why not instead say, "Additional ACRI reports voice concern, alleging that the Israeli government is attempting to undermine democratic institutions in Israel. ACRI maintains the government has also moved to reduce the independence of the judiciary, including the Attorney General of Israel." --- IMO, this doesn't compromise the points you're (rightfully) trying to have the article get across and it's more neutral.EnglishEfternamn*t/c* 23:48, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
EnglishEfternamm, other than the softening of the wording you propose, are we agreed on the rest of my contribution (the original one that I had proposed and the additions I proposed just before your most recent comment)? If so, we can discuss this kind of fine-tuning, but in that regard, I don't see the need to truncate the specific examples provided in the ACRI report per your suggestion.--NYCJosh (talk) 03:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
EnglishEfternamn - please note that 927mag is not a RS. It is a collection of blogs (with a very strong political stance), per their about - Each blogger owns his or her channel and has full rights over its contents (unless otherwise stated). The bloggers alone are responsible for the content posted on their channels; the positions expressed on individual blogs reflect those of their authors, and not +972 as a whole. - which is the definition of WP:BLOGS.Icewhiz (talk) 05:18, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

References

  1. ^ Association for Civil Rights in Israel, "State of Human Rights 2017," (ACRI report published December 2017)
  2. ^ Financial Times, 8 Dec. 2011, "|Israel’s Eroding Democracy: A Shadow is Cast--The Jewish state Appears to be Shackling Some of the Freedoms that Are Central to Its Standing Abroad" ("...they include a law that in effect allows Israeli communities to exclude Arab families; another that imposes penalties on Israelis advocating a boycott of products made in West Bank Jewish settlements; and proposals that would subject the supreme court to greater political oversight.")
  3. ^ 972 Magazine," 17 Apr. 2018, Attempts to 'Bypass' Israel's High Court Will Create a 'Tyranny of the Majority'
  4. ^ Law & Ethics of Human Rights, "Citizenship and Its Erosion: Transfer of Populated Territory and Oath of Allegiance in the Prism of Israeli Constitutional Law," http://law.haifa.ac.il/images/documents/LEHR.pdf
  5. ^ "Israel's equivalent of the ACLU," 972 Magazine," 17 Apr. 2018, Attempts to 'Bypass' Israel's High Court Will Create a 'Tyranny of the Majority'

Talk:Mary Hopkin# Mary Hopkin in the Land of...

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Talk:Bhanushali

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Filed by Checkmate87 on 18:34, 29 June 2018 (UTC).
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Talk:Asturian regional election, 2007#Ovidio Sánchez photo

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Talk:Mahira Khan#Puffery

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Filed by Saqib on 08:23, 20 June 2018 (UTC).

Have you discussed this on a talk page?

Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

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Dispute overview

There're several credible news outlets such as Reuters, New York Times, BBC Urdu, Pakistan's respected newspapers such as Dawn and The Express Tribune which describe Mahira Khan as one of Pakistan's most popular and highest-paid female actor, yet (Ronz and GorgeCustersSabre) feel these claims are not true and the passage has no encyclopedic value therefore it should not be added to the page. I feel the passage is of encyclopedic value, is properly sourced through multiple reliable sources and therefore should be added to the BLP. The news stories which state the claim are not some paid press releases or some tabloid journalism. These are intellectually independent stories published in reputable newspapers which meets the criteria as a reliable secondary sources. Please see the article's talk page for inline citations.

Have you tried to resolve this previously?

Attempted reasoned discussion on talk page to no avail.

How do you think we can help?

Getting more editors involved to reach a consensus can help resolve the issue.

Summary of dispute by Ronz

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Dispute over the quality of sources. Basic BLP and NOT (especially SOAP and NOTNEWS) concerns.

As far as pay goes, the best source we currently have (the only source on the topic with depth and context) makes it clear why any comparative claims are dubious: Comparative salary information is unavailable. The only option for journalists is to ask the actors directly.

As far as popularity goes, we have no sources providing any context for what it means that she's popular (to whom, when, how it was determined, etc). Given that mentions of popularity and pay are usually included in the same sentence in sources with no other context, it appears to be promotional material being repeated without fact checking.

A currently blocked ip has shown that the same claim is being made of multiple Pakistani actresses, which suggests further that this is marketing that is not being fact-checked. --Ronz (talk) 16:21, 20 June 2018 (UTC)

Summary of dispute by GorgeCustersSabre

I am being misrepresented (at least partially) above. I do NOT say the statements are not true. They might be; they might not be. I merely assert two things: 1) that statements about "stars" being "most bankable" etc are not neutral in tone or encyclopedic; and 2) that these statements are throw-away (meaning uncritically presented) comments made by newspapers or magazines not based on comparative research or any empirical evidence. I also question why we allow such comments regarding "stars" (meaning actors and celebrities) when we don't have them for successful sportspeople, business people, medical professionals, community leaders, etc. We don't say that Anthony Joshua is a "highly bankable" boxing "star", for example, even though he is world heavyweight champion. By the way, I am not dogmatic. I will happily abide by whatever editorial consensus emerges. Best wishes, George Custer's Sabre (talk) 02:02, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

Talk:Mahira Khan#Puffery discussion

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  • Volunteer note - There has been adequate discussion on the article talk page. However, the filing party has not notified the other editors. Robert McClenon (talk) 15:44, 20 June 2018 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: I've notified now. This is my first time at DRN so unaware of the procedure. --Saqib (talk) 15:52, 20 June 2018 (UTC)

Talk:Human rights in Israel#Recent_trend_version_2

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Talk:Ta'wiz#Recent Edits

– Discussion in progress.
Filed by Batreeq on 03:58, 23 June 2018 (UTC).

Have you discussed this on a talk page?

Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

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Dispute overview

I am attempting to neutrally add an opinion that Ta'wiz is prohibited in Islam, but the sources I am citing are "unscholarly" and I have been told that I am violating WP:OR.

Have you tried to resolve this previously?

Extensive discussion and attempted justification. Please refer to talk page and last eight revisions of article.

How do you think we can help?

I wish for another unbiased opinion to determine who is erring. Moreover, I am wondering if it is possible to apply Wikipedia:Ignore all rules (If a rule prevents you from improving or maintaining Wikipedia, ignore it.) because the extensive restrictions are preventing me from improving the page. Currently, the article lacks viewpoints on permissibility.

Talk:Ta'wiz#Recent Edits discussion

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  • Volunteer note - There has been discussion at the article talk page. The filing editor has not yet notified the other editor. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:43, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
  • Volunteer note - The filing editor has not yet notified the other editor. If you have Twinkle, you may use the tb tab for the purpose. Otherwise, you may insert {{subst:DRN-notice}} ~~~~ on their user talk page. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:15, 25 June 2018 (UTC)
  • Filer note - @Robert McClenon: Apologies. The other user has been notified. :) – Batreeq (Talk) (Contribs) 22:14, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

@DRN volunteers: - Is a volunteer willing to take this case? Robert McClenon (talk) 02:50, 26 June 2018 (UTC)

  • Volunteer note-@Batreeq:--My style of volunteering is somewhat different in that it align(s) with 3O more often than not.And, I refuse to dodge behind the veils of moderation, in cases of content-dispute(s) and will argue for/against the content, utilising my experience and tenure, over here.If you've problems with such an approach, let me know:)
    • I hate to indulge in such blunt-speak but MontyKind's argument(s) are too good and based in the community-interpretation policies.Frankly, I've a hard time seeing how any of your source manages to pass RS.
      • For one, The Council of Senior Scholars in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia isn't remotely reliable for any Islamic interpretation sans their own extremist views.Ample criticism can be noted.
      • For another, whilst both Muhammad Al-Munajjid and his site have been noted by media, it's in an outright negative sense and for having an abundance of fringe interpretation(s).(often passing them as general scholarly consensus).
      • I need to delve a bit more into Assim al-Hakeem.No comments.
      • Also, interpretation of Quoranic verses is often a subject of interpretation, which requires scholarly efforts and is subject of much debate.You don't link to utterly non-reliable sites (there are so many spread over the web..)as a source to claim the validity of your interpretation.
      • I also fail to get how IslamWeb is anything close to a RS, with lack of availability of editorial info/site-owner/writers et al.
      • Darusallam is not a reliable publishing house, in these spheres (by any margin) and self-published books by borderline-academics fail the stringency of RS either.
        • And, I could go on......
      • Sans exceptions, we are only permitted to use sources published by reputable academic publishers and/or those source(s) which have extensively exploited in other reliable sources.
      • And, umm....WP:IAR doesn't enable anyone to use it as a shield and execute a set of challenged-edit(s) as (self-proclaimed)improvement.One can choose to be bold to execute some editorial changes, under the cover(s) of IAR but once it's reverted, the territory of IAR ends......WBGconverse 05:10, 30 June 2018 (UTC)