Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Chromatophore

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Chromatophore[edit]

I'd like to nominate this for a featured article, as i feel it meets the content requirement and is a fascinating subject that people ask about time and time again at the science reference desk. I guess it is a self nom, as i have provided most of the material over a period of many months, after setting myself a challenge to make a featured article from a stub. I have made efforts for peer review, and have had some excellent advice [1] [2] [3] from both scientists and copyeditors that i have tried to incorporate. I hope it has been enough, if not i'd appreciate your constructive criticism to reach my goal. Rockpocket 04:21, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

  • Commment The 'and' here seems out of place and awkward: "containing and light reflecting" Rlevse 10:10, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed, I believe. Anville 20:06, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Ah yes, I get it now; before I it made me think a word was missing or the and should not be there. Support now.Rlevse 13:33, 13 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. Nice job. Rlevse 13:33, 13 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. Fits FA criteria, nicely written article. — Wackymacs 17:21, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. Jeronimo 17:48, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. I couldn't resist doing a little copy editing, but that's just me. (-: Anville 20:06, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment Thanks for the copyediting, much appreciated. Rockpocket 21:39, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support nicely well done Jaranda wat's sup 03:37, 13 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support per all above. Anonymous_Anonymous 12:56, 13 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support: Very well done and as readable as biochemistry and morphology can be (barring car chases and explosions, of course). Geogre 14:59, 13 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Note to Self: find a way to work car chases and explosions into my next FA nomination. Anville 16:13, 13 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]