Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Kengir uprising
Kengir uprising[edit]
Self nomination. This article has just been peer reviewed and I got some encouraging words and much constructive feedback. Two points made there still remain somewhat unresolved, but it's not clear to me if either will prohibit it from advancing. One was that there are red links at the bottom of the article (I intend to make stubs for them in the coming days) and the other was that majority of the article comes from one source (for whatever its worth, the one source is itself an aggregate of other sources and, as mentioned previously, its essentially one of the only major sources on this rather esoteric event). In whatever case, I hope to come out of this nomination with an substantially improved article, FA or otherwise Thanks in advance for your time, I really appreciate it. --Clngre 01:37, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- Comment Image:Arch gulag cover.jpg has compression artefacts, is a better quality version available? Image:Kazakhstan-Kengir camp.jpg looks like it is created from Image:Kazakhstan-CIA WFB Map.png, but some of the placenames on the old map are not completely erased, also it should not be in jpg. Could a better version be recreated? Thank you. WP 02:22, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- Hello, WP, thanks for the quick reply. In answer to you comments: I was under the impression that book covers had to be of a low quality so that they could, for whatever reason, better qualify as fair use? I have a different edition of the book and will scan it right now at a higher resolution and await your comments on that issue before putting it in the article. (It is a different cover from a different edition, though.) Secondly, I created that Kengir map and will go through it, clean it up, and save it as a png right now. (Would it be more desirable to leave in some of the major place names for context? I'm not sure on this one.) --Clngre 02:42, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- "The significance of the temporary freedom enjoyed by those prisoners, where for forty days several thousand prisoners possessed a freedom unknown not only within Gulag, but even within the whole country outside the camps walls – a veritable island of freedom, in a prison no less, within a sea of repression – was not lost on many." Very bad sentence here. It's obviously POV to call the Soviet Union a sea of repression. This just stood out to me as the most glaring issue. Everyking 06:54, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- Another major problem is the lack of diversification of sources; there are only a couple and in fact Solzhenitsyn is the source for virtually everything. I suppose reliance on his account makes sense, but it would be nice if more sources could be used. There seems to be nothing representing a viewpoint other than that illustrated by the "sea of repression" quote above. Everyking 07:01, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- Hello there. I agree that that sentence is bad, not only because of the POV of statement but just because it sounds so wonky. I'll edit it now to something better. Secondly: I too am made uncomfortable by the fact that Solzhenitsyn is the primary, and almost sole, source on this. This is a tricky issue: the uprising is, like I mentioned, quite obscure and even if you search Google or Google Print for it you don't find too much. There are other serious writings on it but they're all, to my knowledge, in Russian or Ukrainian. An earlier incarnation of the article cited a different book, in Ukrainian, and I've since tracked down the editor and left a note on his talk page asking for him to elaborate on that source but he isn't replying. One major source that I have to check out, though, is Anne Applebaum's book on the history of Gulag, which I hear talks about the uprising in some length. I can go to the library today or tomorrow for that. But I suppose the real question is if one primary source, however good and for however obscure a topic, is ever enough and if things, as a rule, have to be checked and balanced by another primary source. --Clngre 11:25, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- Ok I added three more sources, one of them major. I personally think that this is a fair, appropriate number of sources for such topic, but if it isn't I'd gladly go back to the library and look for more. If the interest is just to have more corroboration of the information, I understand, but I think that for that, at this point, I'd have to enlist the help of a Russian or Ukrainian speaking wikipedian. I'm eager to bring this up to FA level, so please spare no criticism! The better the article is the better it is for all of us. --Clngre 13:30, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
- Comment - So what now? This nomination has seem to stagnated and, while I certainly appreciate the very constructive feedback I've received so far, I'd like to resolve the status of this article as soon as possible because I won't be able to devote much time to it in the near future and fear that, that being the case, I might have to abandon the nomination attempt because I wrote virtually all of the article and will be unavailable. Is this pace common pace for a nomination? The past two articles of mine that I had put to the vote graduated relatively briskly, as I recall. I don't know what to make of this. ??? --Clngre 22:09, 4 September 2006 (UTC)
- Ok I added three more sources, one of them major. I personally think that this is a fair, appropriate number of sources for such topic, but if it isn't I'd gladly go back to the library and look for more. If the interest is just to have more corroboration of the information, I understand, but I think that for that, at this point, I'd have to enlist the help of a Russian or Ukrainian speaking wikipedian. I'm eager to bring this up to FA level, so please spare no criticism! The better the article is the better it is for all of us. --Clngre 13:30, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
- Strong Support - per nom --Ineffable3000 04:47, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
- Comment Inline citations go straight after punctuation without a gap between the punctuation and the inline citation. I see many mistakes (gaps, citation before punctuation, typos, wrong punctuation). You must fix them.--Yannismarou 15:36, 19 September 2006 (UTC)
- Ok, done. I hope I didn't miss any--Clngre 18:30, 19 September 2006 (UTC)
I'm a bit concerned about the number of sources. Just 5 of them. Aren't there any more available. Because of this, you have from me not the full but just a weak support.Full support.--Yannismarou 19:16, 20 September 2006 (UTC)
- I understand your concern and you're right to make that an issue, because it generally is. In this particular circumstance, though, I think five is not only sufficient but virtually the limit. I think the number of sources deemed sufficient for an article is somewhat relative to the breadth and quality of sources that are available for it. For this article, for instance, the topic is quite esoteric and has a limited amount of stuff written about it in English. The sources I did include are of pretty high quality, though. Applebaum included a large footnote for the chapter in which she discusses the uprising, stating the sources she used and found to exist. She sourced her account from interviews, the governments internal records, Russian and Ukrainian texts, and so on, so I find her account to be authoritative. --Clngre 22:56, 20 September 2006 (UTC)
- Ok!--Yannismarou 06:59, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
- I understand your concern and you're right to make that an issue, because it generally is. In this particular circumstance, though, I think five is not only sufficient but virtually the limit. I think the number of sources deemed sufficient for an article is somewhat relative to the breadth and quality of sources that are available for it. For this article, for instance, the topic is quite esoteric and has a limited amount of stuff written about it in English. The sources I did include are of pretty high quality, though. Applebaum included a large footnote for the chapter in which she discusses the uprising, stating the sources she used and found to exist. She sourced her account from interviews, the governments internal records, Russian and Ukrainian texts, and so on, so I find her account to be authoritative. --Clngre 22:56, 20 September 2006 (UTC)
- Strong Support awesome read. Rama's arrow 04:01, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
- Comment A very good article, but I think it has way too many quotes for an encyclopedic entry. Quotes should be minimized as much as possible. Resolve this problem and I'll gladly support.UberCryxic 17:13, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
- I see what you mean and that's a valid point. Some of the quotes have a lot of merit and should be kept I believe (the transcript of their propaganda, for instance), some are just usefully illustrative, and some are, like you said, superfluous. I used my best judgement and removed a bunch of quotes in the last category, but let me know if you still believe it could use some more pruning, as I'd be happy to do it. Thanks for your kind words as well. --Clngre 00:45, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
Very Very Small Object pending fixing of the refs. For example there are five references for page 501 from Applebaum's book. They could all be merged into the one. Just to tidy it up.Good read though. Todd661 23:39, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
- You're right, I never thought of that, I just went through and paired up all of the doubles. Feel free to let me know if I missed. Thank you --Clngre 00:18, 25 September 2006 (UTC)