Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Pharaoh and Cleopatra (computer game)

Pharaoh and Cleopatra[edit]

Nominated for Featured Article Status based upon a recent expansion where the article was tripeled in detail and a large amount of information and pictures added. I might have missed something, but the article appears to meet the criteria for an FAC and is so nominated. -Husnock 10:11, 17 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose too many bullets and tables, no inline cites. Rlevse 12:43, 17 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I can possibly do something about adding inline citations but I am at a loss at how to address "too many bullets and tables" since they contain information pertianing to the topic. What is your suggested course of correction to mkae this actionable? -Husnock 13:03, 17 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  - See the FA Final Fantasy VII on how to make a game a FA. FAs should contain brilliant prose, not a bunch of tables and lists. Rlevse 13:40, 17 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose, I'd say there isn't any reliable sources provided at all, and fair use images are not accounted for with rationale. - Mailer Diablo 15:47, 17 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Strong oppose — heavy lists. Refer to WP:PR first. — Indon (reply) — 16:12, 17 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: Husnock, why did you move the article? Unless there's another possible article with that title, you don't need the modifier in brackets behind the title. Pharaoh and Cleopatra is the better title compared to Pharaoh and Cleopatra (computer game) according to the naming conventions. - Mgm|^(talk) 10:17, 21 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]