Wikipedia:Featured article review/Armand Jean du Plessis, Cardinal Richelieu/archive1

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The article was removed 08:57, July 28, 2007.

Armand Jean du Plessis, Cardinal Richelieu[edit]

Review commentary[edit]

WP French MilHist, WP Catholicism, WP Biography (politics), WP France notified. DrKiernan 06:55, 29 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Nominating due to criterion 1c, no inline cites --RelHistBuff 15:15, 21 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Re-nominated. I don't understand why the previous nomination was ignored - the article has no citations at all. Maybe RHB didn't go through all the steps to make sure it appears. Anyway the article either needs a lot of citations right away, or should have its FA status removed. John Smith's 22:37, 28 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I saw this renomination by chance, so I will come out of semi-retirement. To clarify, I removed my own original nomination because at the time, the FAR queue was quite overloaded. There is one inline cite, a Harvard reference, at the end, but that's it. As for style, the use of parenthetical elements should be reduced and there are some bizarre uses of mdashes. I would be willing to help fix the style, but only if someone else can handle the citations. This is a Lord Emsworth contribution and he is on extended holiday, so I don't know if anyone around would be willing to help fix it. --RelHistBuff 15:54, 29 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Well it needs to be fixed, whether or not anyone wants to volunteer for citation work. Otherwise it probably will be removed. John Smith's 21:10, 30 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

FARC commentary[edit]

Suggested FA criteria concern is citations (1c). Marskell 17:58, 14 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Remove: If someone works on this, I will reconsider the vote. --RelHistBuff 22:49, 14 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Remove 1c. DrKiernan 10:56, 17 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Remove per 1c. LuciferMorgan 01:28, 27 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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