Wikipedia:Featured article review/Bank of China (Hong Kong)/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed by User:Marskell 14:19, 8 September 2008 [1].

Bank of China (Hong Kong)[edit]

Review commentary[edit]

Notified WP Companies, WP Business, ‎ WP China, WP Hong Kong and Juntung.

Lacking inline citations, outdated (most as of dates are dated), and MoS cleanup needed. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:01, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have to agree. This article needs major work. There was another major restructuring of the bank in 2005 or possibly 2006 that is not mentioned at all. --Patrick (talk) 01:13, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

At current condition, it won't even meet the criteria for GA. OhanaUnited^{Talk page} 02:14, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Needs more work, i agree with OhanaUnited --Itemirus (talk) 08:27, 14 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Agree with OhanaUnited (talk · contribs), this article certainly does not meet WP:GA standards at this point in time, let alone WP:FA. Cirt (talk) 17:08, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

FARC commentary[edit]

Suggested FA criteria concerns are referencing (1c) and MoS (2). Marskell (talk) 08:59, 25 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Remove. Per my comment above and the initial comment by SandyGeorgia (talk · contribs). Cirt (talk) 21:42, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Remove per 1c issues. LuciferMorgan (talk) 18:19, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Remove. Explained my reason on the above section. OhanaUnited^{Talk page} 18:23, 28 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Remove 1c. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 00:53, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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