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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 8:01, 26 December 2020 (UTC) [1].

Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Miami[edit]

Notified: NancyHeise, Student7, WP Florida, WP Miami, WP Catholicism, WP Christianity, talk page 2020-11-10

Review section[edit]

This is a 2007 promotion that has not been maintained to standard. Issues detailed on talk [2] include considerable dated information, possible POV because of omission of sexual scandals, some MOS cleanup needed, and inconsistent citations. Independently, the FAC Coord who promoted this article (ahem-- moi-- possibly my first promotion) appears to have misread the FAC, as there were not three supports (I did not promote articles on two supports). For that reason, I won't be entering a declaration and ask that others shephard this one. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:01, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • This is one I might normally try to work on, but I'm very busy in RL right now, and don't really have the time or energy. I will note that most of the article appears to be outdated, and the fact that Sexual abuse scandal in the Archdiocese of Miami is relegated to a see also link and is not mentioned in the prose is also problematic. It at least needs a short section. Hog Farm Bacon 17:29, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

FARC section[edit]

Issues raised in the review section include currency and neutrality. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:09, 12 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delist - no engagement, significant issues. Hog Farm Bacon 05:27, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delist. Prose isn't engaging or of a professional standard, e.g. "university of St. Thomas University in Miami. St. Thomas University", "[seminaries] serve priestly formation needs", and "Located in Hialeah, Florida, is a Diocesan seminary where the seminarians once ordained, will be at the disposal of the Archbishop for internal or missionary assignments." Lists of statistics are piled together into overlong sentences with a repetitive structure in the Catholic Health Services section. Single link to the article on the abuse scandal in the See also section is a weakness; it should be linked in the text. Occasional padding or promotional tone, e.g. "The archdiocese uses several types of media to fulfill its evangelization efforts". DrKay (talk) 15:45, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delist not comprehensive (t · c) buidhe 15:12, 22 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 18:01, 26 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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