Wikipedia:Featured article review/Twelfth Amendment to the United States Constitution/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 11:17, 14 June 2007.

Twelfth Amendment to the United States Constitution[edit]

Review commentary[edit]

Messages left at United States and US Congress. Marskell 07:32, 10 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Another Emsworth nom. I'm not just concerned about inline citations but about an almost total lack of references in general in ref section (1c). About a quarter of the article is a text dump of the amendment (4), the LEAD is short (2a), and it's hard to call this comprehensive given its size (1b). Marskell 07:23, 10 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I agree. A lot of work is needed. LuciferMorgan 14:52, 10 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

FARC commentary[edit]

Suggested FA criteria concerns are citations and reference sufficiency (1c), focus (4), and comprehensiveness (1b). Marskell 09:28, 25 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Remove per 1c. LuciferMorgan 22:11, 28 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

It seems that this discussion might possibly end prematurely (I am not sure). Sjones23 20:08, 2 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Remove - Needs to be brought up to standard. Judgesurreal777 02:46, 4 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Remove, diff since nom. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:47, 13 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Remove Short lead, huge text dump, no inline citations, very few refs, existing refs not formatted properly. Jay32183 02:50, 13 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.