Wikipedia:Featured article review candidates/El Lissitzky
El Lissitzky[edit]
This version was promoted in March, and has not really changed much. Some links were fixed, and I note the addition of an invisible comment asking for a clarification on one issue. All other changes were copyediting, image moving and such. Tuf-Kat 06:49, 20 November 2005 (UTC)
- Excellent article. Technical issues include, two unreferenced quotes: one from an "one English newspaper columnist" and one from his own autobiography(!). Note 3 is not properly referenced (references quotes but does not provide a page number). The "The avant garde" section has no text (why do so many article have sections without text? what is that suppose to accomplish?). Otherwise, it is an amazing article. --maclean25 22:54, 21 November 2005 (UTC)
- I removed the unreferenced quotation by "one English newspaper columnist" and added the footnote to his autobiography. "The avant garde" section was re-named to "Avant garde" per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings). That section does not have text but can used to discuss his impact on avant garde and tie the three subsections together. I do not believe I am qualified to write such an introduction. --maclean25 05:39, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
- I think that it's meant to be a super-heading only. It's poor organization rather than an empty section. Jkelly 05:44, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
- I removed the unreferenced quotation by "one English newspaper columnist" and added the footnote to his autobiography. "The avant garde" section was re-named to "Avant garde" per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings). That section does not have text but can used to discuss his impact on avant garde and tie the three subsections together. I do not believe I am qualified to write such an introduction. --maclean25 05:39, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
- closed 16:46, 8 December 2005 by TUF-KAT