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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 16:35, 27 June 2011 [1].

List of Cornwall CCC List A players[edit]

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Nominator(s): Harrias talk 11:39, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I feel it meets the FL criteria and has been modelled on current FLs such as List of South Africa women ODI cricketers. I have an open nomination in List of international cricket centuries by Andrew Strauss, however all current comments have been resolved for that nomination. As usual, all comments are welcomed! Harrias talk 11:39, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 19:03, 17 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Link "List A" in the second sentence.
  • Done.
  • "appearance" "appeared" repetitive.
  • Changed second use to "played".
  • Links for Natwest trophy and C&G?
  • "of the competition..." ah, is this the same competition with different branding? Perhaps a note, or something for the non-expert?
  • Added a note to this effect.
  • Timothy Walton is a dab page.
  • Fixed.
  • Do you "take" a stumping or do you "make" it?
  • Good point, you make it. Have added it in, although it might be worth reworking slightly?
  • Maybe worth noting only three non-Englishmen in the list.
  • Added a sentence, though it isn't very exciting!
  • Can we consider making the table accessible with row and col scopes? User:RexxS is usually a diamond geezer for this kind of thing.
  • Pretty sure I've managed this now: I had concerns before due to the emboldening, but with the "plainrowheaders" option, I got around that. Harrias talk 08:41, 8 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any reason the captain's table is centrally aligned within the article?
  • No, it's now left-aligned, like the rest of the article.
  • Not keen on a red-linked category.
  • It's now blue.
  • Daily Telegraph should be The Daily Telegraph.
  • Fixed.

The Rambling Man (talk) 17:19, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your comments: I've had an initial quick run through your points, and will come back to the others later. Harrias talk 19:09, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (27 and counting) 21:03, 9 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Comments – Nit-picks only from me...
  • "closely followed by Jonathan Kent who made eleven appearances." Minor, but a comma would be nice after the name.
  • "Players are initially listed in order of appearance, where players made their debut in the same match, they are initially ordered by batting order." Two things. First, the first comma would be better as a semi-colon. Second, "ordered by batting order" is a touch redundant. That could use a different term.
  • One more minor one: reference 1 could use a PDF designation. Giants2008 (27 and counting) 23:34, 25 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    • It's been almost two weeks and there's no response here or above for a couple of TRM's comments. Not that these are the most important things in the world, but it would be nice to see them addressed all the same. Giants2008 (27 and counting) 23:06, 7 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      • Apologies, I've been pretty busy in RL lately, and let this slip through the cracks. I've addressed all of your points now, and I believe the only one outstanding from TRM is the row and col scopes, which I will look into, but I'm no expert in that yet myself. Harrias talk 08:19, 8 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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