Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of World Heritage Sites in Slovakia/archive1
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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 5 July 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of World Heritage Sites in Slovakia[edit]
List of World Heritage Sites in Slovakia (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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Slovakia has 7 WHS and 14 sites on the tentative list. The list for Hungary is seeing some support so I am adding a new nomination. The style is standard. I am now using a slightly longer version of the intro which should help with the often-seen concern that the intro was short. The style follows the previously promoted FLs. Tone 14:39, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:24, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:14, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – Pass[edit]
- Formatting
- consistent all around
- Reliability
- uses UNESCO sources, which is standard with UNESCO lists and certainly reliable
- Verifiability
- have checked a couple, all checks out from what I saw. Aza24 (talk) 02:36, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Pass for source review. Aza24 (talk) 02:36, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Image review–pass[edit]
All images have appropriate free licenses. (t · c) buidhe 02:53, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Some too-similar wording in my spot checks: "Renaissance palaces, 16th-century churches, elegant squares, and castles", "of Late Cretaceous and early Tertiary subtropical and tropical climatic conditions, as well as"; "gradually widened into the shape of a lens and in its largest span"
- @Reywas92: I did some rephrasing, please have a look. --Tone 17:25, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- "While the mining activities in the area already took place" -> "While mining activities in the area took place".
- "including gold and silver" these are not polymetallic ores.
- Changed to "containing"
- "the first Mining and Forestry Academy in Europe was founded here" if this is a notable establishment, why don't we have Mining and Forestry Academy?
- I don't know :)
- Vlkolinec lost its diacritic in the description.
- "the caves Domica..." caves would normally flow better at the end of the list of names.
- "Four reserves in Slovakia are listed, Stužica – Bukovské vrchy, Rožok, Vihorlat, and Havešová.[12]" where are they noted in ref 12?
- The complete list is on the "Maps" tab of the website, not sure if I should link separately.
- "the Carpathian area" you've linked Carpathian twice (at least) so far, be consistent and do it here too.
- "at the junction of three different faiths" feels like a guidebook.
- Changed.
- "feudal churches" what's a feudal church?
- Honestly, no idea. But the reference say so. Changed simply to churches.
- "for centuries" how many? This is an encyclopedia, not a guidebook.
- Good point. Since prehistoric times, as the ref says.
- "well preserved traditional" hyphenate well-preserved but you said "preserve traditional" earlier in the same sentence so it's jarringly repetitive.
- Removed well-preserved, reads better.
- "Original Meadow - Pasture Sites" en-dash
- "Limes Romanus - The Roman" ditto.
- "road getting gradually widened into" -> "road gradually widening into"
- "The Tatras are" link.
- I alread link Tatra Mountains in the property name.
- "Europe - extension" en-dash.
- "centuries. [29][30]" no space before refs.
- Check refs for spaced hyphens, should be en-dashes (e.g. ref 18, 20, 21, 22 and 31).
- Not sure why Category:Eastern Europe is a cat here, far too general.
- Removed.
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:33, 29 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: Done, thank you! --Tone 14:19, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support I can't find any faults --In actu (Guerillero) Parlez Moi 20:00, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:07, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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