Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of chief ministers of Uttarakhand/archive1
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List of chief ministers of Uttarakhand[edit]
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Another in a series of Chief Minister lists, after List of chief ministers of Jharkhand and List of chief ministers of Chhattisgarh. I thought about expanding the second lead paragraph but I don't really see any benefit in repeating the information already available in table just for the sake of it; but feel free to expand it if any inadequacy is felt. Regards, TryKid (talk) 08:52, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose from Harrias[edit]
- Make the table sortable.
- Add to the functionality of the table by splitting the tenure length into a different cell, so we can sort by date and length.
- Add a table caption, and move the key away from the top row, where it will confuse screen readers into thinking that it is a header for the article.
- The lead really needs more information. Why for example did Harish Rawat only serve for one day at one stage? What happened before 9 November 2000, was there just no chief minister, or no state?
For me, this falls pretty well short of the FL criteria at the moment: both for the prose and the table. Harrias talk 09:32, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Guerillero[edit]
Thoughts
- The sources look good to me. Everything is formatted consistently, they all look reliable, and the links are good
- I agree with Harrias that the leade is far too short
- The alt texts need to be better
--Guerillero | Parlez Moi 15:16, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from ChrisTheDude[edit]
My only major concern is the brevity of the lead, as mentioned above. I think the fact that one of the office holders was in post for a single day is definitely unusual enough that it needs further explanation in the lead, for starters...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:23, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Chidgk1[edit]
- In the footnote it says that President's rule "often happens because no party or coalition has a majority in the assembly." So if that was the case for all the occasions it might be worth mentioning in the lede.
- Also in the lede - has it always been the leader of the largest party who has become chief minister?
- Perhaps the default order should be most recent at the top - not sure what other reviewers think.
- Absolutely not, per WP:CHRONO -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:31, 9 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- In the hope there might be a woman in future in the footnote change "The state government he headed" to "The state government they headed"
If you have time could you take a quick glance at List of active coal-fired power stations in Turkey. I would especially like to know at Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of active coal fired power stations in Turkey/archive1 if anything is confusing for new readers.
Chidgk1 (talk) 19:17, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Further comment from ChrisTheDude[edit]
Multiple users (including myself) pointed out two months ago that the lead was far too short, and in that time there has been no significant expansion. @TryKid:, do you intend to do any further expansion.....? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:19, 18 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- I completely forgot about this! 😫 I'm extremely sorry for this and apologize to the reviewers for wasting their time. I'm in some real life commitment now and want to withdraw this. I think this is the second time I've done this. Sorry. 😣 I apologize again. TryKid [dubious – discuss] 23:05, 21 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 23:22, 9 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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