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2005 UEFA Champions League Final[edit]

I'm going to try a model this on 2007 UEFA Champions League Final. But since this was a far more eventful match that may not be enough so I'm giving it this PR too. Buc 12:27, 11 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Just a few quick points from a skim read.
  • The article needs a very good copy edit. There's lots of typos, spelling mistakes and capitals in middle of words. I reckon it needs bring into line with WP:MOS. I'm sure 1st game should read first game.
  • There seems to be lots of WP:POV in there. E.g. A great defensive performance in Turin, Milan were the better team in extra time.
  • Needs some more references for some comments, E.g. 'In the second round Andrea Pirlo's shot was saved by Liverpool's goalkeeper Jerzy Dudek, although controversy later arose over the goalkeeper's supposed movement off his goal line before the ball was kicked'.
  • Some emdashes need putting in.
  • The references need putting into line with WP:MOS too. Peanut4 00:42, 12 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 19:48, 12 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]