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32 Battalion (Book)[edit]

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A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for July 2009.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know where to improve it. Any comments are welcome.

Thanks, Lourie Pieterse 11:28, 3 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Redtigerxyz's review

The first impression: The article is short.
Expand on: Search articles on similar books on wikipedia (search WP:FA and WP:GA first) for more.
- Structure of the book: Chapters and summary
- Sales
- Reviews
The chapter headings of this book are very special. These are the names of songs traditionally sung by 32 Battalion, translated into English. These songs were sung on the eve of battle or on the parade ground. (reference needed)
People who made a contribution to this book: who are they? friends of the author, army colleagues: seniors or juniors --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 14:33, 10 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]