Wikipedia:Peer review/Alcibiades/archive1
Alcibiades[edit]
I've completed another copy-edit of the article. I know some more tweaks are still necessary before going for FA (the article is already GA), but I thought it was high time I had some suggestions and thoughts from peer-reviewers.--Yannismarou 13:04, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
- A couple of small things. The lead might be a little too long, and could you make the pictures a bit larger. --Peter Andersen 18:32, 19 September 2006 (UTC)
- I know about the lead. But it is so brillantly written by Robth that I dare to touch it! I prefer to leave the pictures in their natural size. So, if somebody wants to enlarge them, he can just click on them. But you may be right. I'll think on that. Thanks!--Yannismarou 18:38, 19 September 2006 (UTC)
- Lead trimmed now a bit.--Yannismarou 20:52, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
- I know about the lead. But it is so brillantly written by Robth that I dare to touch it! I prefer to leave the pictures in their natural size. So, if somebody wants to enlarge them, he can just click on them. But you may be right. I'll think on that. Thanks!--Yannismarou 18:38, 19 September 2006 (UTC)