Wikipedia:Peer review/Asha Bhosle/archive1
Asha Bhosle[edit]
Hey guys! This is an article about a veteran Indian playback singer - Asha Bhosle. She has sung nearly 12,000 songs in her 64 years career, and is still active. The page looks really good, there's a lot of text and information, it is well referenced and I think we could raise it to a high status with some good suggestions and improvements.
We'll be waiting for suggestions, guys. This page is watched and any advice is much anticipated, as well as any suggestions and ideas will be greatly appreciated.
Thanks, --Shahid • Talk2me 00:40, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
Review by DrKiernan[edit]
I've had a very brief scan through and spotted the following:
- Single years without dates should not be linked.
- Please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?] - Please don't link words in headings; depending on settings some users don't see them.
- "Many people have speculated about a romantic relationship between the two." Who? Please be specific, and ensure the references provided adhere to WP:BLP.
- "Some of the most popular...", "It is said that Helen...", "Some good examples of their sensuous numbers...", and "Some say that Lata had once said something..." Who says? Provide a reference and be specific.
- "Shammi Kapoor, the actor of the movie, once said...", "he said that Asha "lacks certain something...", ""Nevertheless, he also said..." , etc. Where are the quotes from? Provide references.
- The references should have the same format throughout. At present there are some as footnotes and some as web links.
This isn't my area of interest but I hope you find these pointers useful. DrKiernan 07:24, 18 October 2007 (UTC)