Wikipedia:Peer review/Avatar: The Last Airbender/archive3
Avatar: The Last Airbender[edit]
- A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for January 2009.
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I've listed this article for peer review because this article was formally featured and even on the main page once, but has since fallen from grace. I would like to fix that.
Thanks, The Placebo Effect (talk) 04:21, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure if the usual grammar-style peer review is needed here. I think a specific section by section of what to add and what to cut would be best. NuclearWarfare (Talk) 20:51, 7 January 2009 (UTC)
- David Fuchs
- Turn lists into prose. Many sections, such as "fighting styles", look rather shoddy with internal lists. Likewise with "Awards and nominations"
- Citation needed for "The divine medium who has descended upon the mortal world."
- "Online game" is a stubby subsection that should be fleshed out or merged.
- Likewise, what I think the article is missing the most (besides some pictures--see if you can find a free one of the creators) is content. There's lots of stubby sections and paragraphs.
- The infobox is ridiculously long. You don't need to mention every voice actor and every writer.
--Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (talk) 19:55, 17 January 2009 (UTC)