Wikipedia:Peer review/Beer/archive1

Beer[edit]

This is a former featured article. It was removed because. It has received a bit of work lately. It seems to me most reasons for removal have been removed. I'm not sure if it's a featured article candidate like this but the topic is important enough ;-) to make it one. So some comments please. Some of the work was done by myself so I suppose this is a self-nomination. Piet 13:15, 7 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Article needs some referencing. primarily within the text, using ref/note style or similar [1]. Look out for spacing between subheadings and text to ensure uniformity. Can the the history be expanded as well? I agree that it's a worthwhile article and it has decent imagery but maybe nice if at least one of the interior of a brewery. The beer culture section can all be combined or each section expanded.--MONGO 13:27, 7 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This is going to be a great article, but it does need a thorough overhaul. People are still working on it and there is plenty of work to do. I would love Beer to be a featured article, but not in its current state. SilkTork 13:31, 7 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]