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Censorship in the Federal Republic of Germany[edit]

This is an article I wrote a while back, but didn't source it. I've added a fistful of sources now. Since this is sort of a pet interest of mine, I'd ultimately be interested in getting this article up to GA snuff. For now, I'm looking for both general and specific comments on the article.

  • What in this article needs to be expanded? What direction do you think the sections / article should go?
  • Are there more things that ought to be cited? Having lived in Germany, I am afraid I may take things for granted which should be cited for a wider audience.

Note that this article is meant to deal only with West and contemporary Germany.

Thanks a lot

Cheers! - Revolving Bugbear (formerly Che Nuevara) 16:14, 4 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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  • It needs some images. I know it't be hard to find some relating to censorship but that needs to be looked inot anyway--Phoenix-wiki (talk · contribs) 20:34, 7 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]