Wikipedia:Peer review/Demoscene/archive1

Demoscene[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because ever since it's nomination to FA status, it has been extended immensely with various subpages and other content material. The subculture has been expanding vastly over the years and currently is one of the featured concepts of various digital film festivals and other related events. Gargaj 19:28, 14 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 13:47, 16 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Some of this reads like original research (The perception that the demo scene was going to extremes and charting new territory added to its draw.) Without citations it is hard to tell if is original reasearch or not. You need lots more citations. Expand the lead to that it summarizes every section in the article. Also there are too many external links.--BirgitteSB 17:43, 29 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]