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Emergency department[edit]

This article has been through the Article Improvement Drive effort and earned a week of improvement where it was enhanced quite significantly. It still needs improvement, and I would certainly like to see it through to become a featured article soon. — Wackymacs 22:04, 3 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

  • It looks good, but I have a few possible suggestions. The bullets can be readily eliminated from the Department layout section, as the text works just fine as paragraphs. The page could use a history section about where and how emergency departments began, perhaps the influence of wars on their development (if any), and how widespread they have become. Also something on media shows that have been based on these departments. Do you have any information about how widespread this organizational structure is world-wide? Any differences in procedures from country to country? Thanks. — RJH 23:57, 4 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]
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