Wikipedia:Peer review/Ethernet/archive1
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This is frequently visited technology page and an important subject. Recent work on the article includes improving organization, adding citations and pushing highly detailed material to other articles. I'd like to know what needs to be done to get this article to a B rating.
Thanks, Kvng (talk) 13:54, 16 September 2010 (UTC)
- Comments by Jebus989
Large parts of the article are completely unsourced, especially Evolution - a very long section with only a single sourceThere are now numerous sources in this section. The section also is written in WP:SUMMARY style so is supported by {{main}} articles and the citations therein. --Kvng (talk) 01:38, 11 September 2011 (UTC)The two {{citation needed}} tags in the History should be fixed. Either remove the unverified claims or find sourcesCitations added. Uncited and non-critical materiel removed --Kvng (talk) 01:21, 11 September 2011 (UTC)- Simple networking diagrams could be useful
Ref 1 redirects to here, the URL should be fixedLink no longer present --Kvng (talk) 01:21, 11 September 2011 (UTC)The lead paragraph could do with some expansion, to adequately summarise the article and give more adequate context (see WP:LS)Work has been done on the lead. --Kvng (talk) 01:13, 28 November 2011 (UTC)- The article has seven notes, maybe some of these could be moved inline.
The article has a good amount of content but a lack of reliable sources is currently an issue. There are two additional references which do not have inline citations, if inline citations were added for these references they could be more useful Jebus989✰ 18:13, 16 September 2010 (UTC)