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Fair trade[edit]

I have worked quite extensively on this article. I would like feedback and also suggestions on what could be done to make this a featured article. Thank you for your help! Quebecois1983 21:01, 3 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Very good article. I had some minor quibbles though. The 'Key fairtrade principles' section needs to be written in summary style (like the rest of the article). The FINE definition should probably go in the body of the text and it should just be described shortly in the lead. Right now it makes the lead very cumbersome and may scare off potential readers. Other than that, seems good.UberCryxic 01:58, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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