Wikipedia:Peer review/Geography of North America/archive1

This is my best article, please review it.Showmanship is the key 19:45, 1 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Some more pictures would be good. P eople Powered 01:45, 2 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Comment The article must clearly define the geographic boundaries of North America. Joelito (talk) 16:44, 6 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 15:44, 17 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

A few things (nothing personal!):

Some of the prose is very poor. For example "Relif maps of the United States partially shows why they've come to exist." doesn't make much sense to me. Go for a copy edit, or at least run the prose through a spell-checker at the very least.
Fix the citations (and add more). They should be in numbered order and after all punctuation.
Only the first word of a title should be capitalized (see WP:MOS).
More images as North America is such a beautiful region! There should be larger images as well (Wikimedia Commons must have plenty).
The Bibliography and Reference sections should be merged
Clean up the lead. I'm not sure why the peoples of North America are mentioned in the last paragraph of the lead.

It's a promising article however. CloudNine 22:05, 31 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]