Wikipedia:Peer review/Hamilton, Ontario/archive1

Hamilton, Ontario

This article was submitted to a peer review on December 23, 2006. Since then, major improvements have been made to the page by User:Nhl4hamilton and User:Alan.ca (who requested the original review). All of the suggestions made by User:Nichalp during the review were taken into account. Please see a comparison here: diff.

It has already been listed as a Good Article.

I would like to nominate this article for Feature Candidate status, but I want to make sure it's ready. Thanks for all the input you all can provide. ... discospinster _talk 14:01, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 23:58, 17 May 2007 (UTC)

• If you were to submit it to FAC they would tell you:
  • to remove the external links from the body of the article and place them, either in the "References" section or the "External links" section, (DONE)
  • not allow the text to be squeezed between the two tables in the "Demographics" (DONE)
  • provide a footnote for "has been called one of the most beautiful naturally formed in the world." (DONE)
  • use Wikipedia:Summary style on the "Culture" section with Culture of Hamilton, Ontario (currently the "Culture" section is 4 kilobytes larger than the "Culture" article). (DONE)
• Other comments to consider:
  • Google Earth can be used under Fair Use?
  • the climate table and sentence look oddly placed. (I considered it and think it should stay where its at for now- DONE)
  • "In 2005, Hamilton has an estimated population of 714,900..." according to who? Stats Can? (DONE)
  • the first two parapraghs of the "Economy" section should be merged and rationalized. Just state it is the "centre" (economic centre? geographic centre?) of the GH and this is what that means... (DONE)
  • "Currently the Airport needs 1,000 hectares of" - 'needs'? I doubt that. 'projects it can use' or 'requests' would be more accurate. (DONE)
  • The "Oh What a Feeling" paragraph of the "Culture" section is stretching to relate it with Hamilton. (DONE)

--maclean 23:57, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

• O.K. guys. I just finished going over the list and went over to the article and modified as per this Peer Review.  Nhl4hamilton | Chit-Chat  05:12, 09 June 2007 (UTC)