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Hammer Film Productions[edit]

The article has grown quite a lot recently. We'd appreciate any wider feedback on how to improve it further. I know the article is quite weak on Hammer's non-horror related films, and I'd particularly like some advice on the notes. When I expanded the article I made sure to note the source of each fact. I figured that too much info was better than too little when citing sources. - Motor (talk) 19:59, 16 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

  • Not bad, but there are a lot of red links. Another concern is the number of orphan words, too many words are left in their own sentence at the end of paragraphs — I suggest a copy-edit. More pictures would be nice. Looking good so far. — Wackymacs 20:26, 16 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]
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