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History of Sunderland A.F.C.

• A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for December 2008.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve it to GA class, and would like some comments on what I could do to reach that target. Thanks. Sunderland06 (talk) 19:49, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

• Comments - Until I can give the article a proper review, I'll limit myself to these two comments:
  • First, I would like to see each section given a subtitle that gives some indication of why those years have been grouped together. This is more of a stylistic point than to do with content, so it's not essential if you're only going for GA status, but it would be nice. Done - I've added some.
  • I noticed that there is a lack of consistency with regard to the use of endashes in date ranges. Make sure that all hyphens in date ranges are replaced with endashes. Done - Went over with a MOS tool, should've caught them all.
    • I think you've still missed some. You're better off going over it visually yourself. Just go through the article with your browser's "Find" function looking for all the hyphens and see which ones need changing to endashes. – PeeJay 21:08, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
      • Right I went through it manually, and the Opera browser doesn't seem to like to do it the easy way. I think this time I've changed all of them.
• I might come back soon, when I can give the article a more thorough going-over, but this will have to do for now. I'm sure others will point out most of the things that need improving anyway. – PeeJay 20:09, 15 December 2008 (UTC)