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Hugo Danner

I just recently expanded this page from a single paragraph to it's current status. I think it is nearly "Good Article" (GA) class, but I want to get other editor's opinions on what can be done to improve the page further. I personally think the lead needs to be expanded, but I'm horrible at summarizing things. I would like it if someone could help me with this in addition.

Thanks,

Ghostexorcist 07:57, 24 September 2007 (UTC)

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 00:47, 25 September 2007 (UTC)