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Hurricane Felix (1995)[edit]

The article is one of the Good Article Collaborations. Some suggestions on how the article could be improved would be apprciated. Tarret 16:17, 9 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thoughts:

"The large size of the hurricane, potential for re-strengthening, and slow forward motion, the worst case scenario of 7 to 9 feet would cause wide-spread flooding throughout southeastern Virginia." This is not a sentence.
That the hurricane was not as severe as originally feared could be made more explicit.
Some stubby subsections under "Impact".
Some of the wording under "Aftermath" is unclear. And does "Lack of Retirement" really need its own section?

Good luck. -- bcasterline • talk 16:50, 9 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]