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Islam and secularism

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because due to merger between Secularism in the Middle East with Islam and secularism. The information in both articles overlap, and in any case this issue requires a thorough treatment.

Thanks, The Egyptian Liberal (talk) 16:34, 1 June 2010 (UTC)

Note: This article does not look ready for peer review at present. For example:-

• It has a major cleanup banner relating to a lack of citations. The banner was placed on 19 April, since when more citations have been added. But the banner is still in place, as are numerous individual "citation needed" tags.
• The single-paragraph lead is an inadequate introduction to an article of this length.
• Several sections (Lebanon, Iraq, Bangladesh) seem to be unwritten at present.
• There are many formatting problems with the citations.
• The use of a verbatim quotation extending to three paragraphs and 350+ words is not appropraiate.

The article should be withdrawn from peer review until its development as an article is further advanced. Brianboulton (talk) 22:58, 6 June 2010 (UTC)