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Kota Kinabalu[edit]

Hi there. I have contributed a lot to this article and would like some feedback on its current form: prose, grammar, content, anything that needs improvement. Any feedback will be appreciated very much. kawaputra 04:50, 5 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Why no review? a simple comment, or even automated review is ok. Just want a little feedback. Thanks. kawaputra 04:07, 20 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by User:RaveenS[edit]

Just a few

  • The lead in is extensive, look into shortening it.
  • Number of citations have been not properly cited yet, example [1], [2] instead of using proper citation format. RaveenS 15:07, 8 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Thanks Raveen. will try apply your suggestions asap. kawaputratok2me 07:14, 9 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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