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A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2008.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I think it needs general review.

Thanks, Kozuch (talk) 12:05, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement.
Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text.
Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked.
Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article.
The two tags as soon as you see the article tell alot. It needs citations.
This section needs a cleanup.
This section needs an update.
This section has no citation whatsoever.
Expand the "Advantages" section. I'm sure there is more to it then that.
That's all for now. « Milk's Favorite Cøøkie ^{( talk / contribs)} 19:38, 17 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]