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List of Slovenian football champions[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because… I feel this is a strong FL candidate and I just wanted to do a PR first, before nominating the list. All comments are welcomed and appreciated.
Thanks, Ratipok (talk) 01:10, 3 May 2012 (UTC)
- It seems I have mistakenly requested this PR and listed the article as an "Everyday life" topic. I have changed it now to "Lists" and hope this will be enough, so I dont need to remove the PR and request another one. Thanks, Ratipok (talk) 11:55, 3 May 2012 (UTC)
- Comments
- Second image caption is a complete sentence so should use a full stop.
- While you link "football in Slovenia" and "Independence of Slovenia", you don't appear to actually link "Slovenia"!
- I'd probably prefer to see "association football" linked instead...
- "with only three clubs " could say who.
- "During its times in the Yugoslav leagues, most of Slovenian teams competed " not great grammatically, would suggest a copyeditor has a look at the prose.
- "teams were joined in the newly formed Slovenian football league to compete for the title of " would rephrase, maybe "teams competed in the newly formed Slovenian football league for the title of..."
- "teams in PrvaLiga" I'd typically expect to see "in the PrvaLiga" but perhaps this isn't common usage when referring to it?
- "a spot in the UEFA competitions" can you be more specific?
- Check for the correct use of en dashes in the references with year ranges etc.
The Rambling Man (talk) 09:27, 4 May 2012 (UTC)