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List of compositions by Cécile Chaminade[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because… I've listed this article for peer review because… it is being presented in an interesting way for the readers; clean, neat, orderly-fashion mode, with lots of information for each of Chaminade's musical pieces. I think she deserves better than what she had from us so far. One more thing, please, I would like your input, not correction, but complementary advice and smiles. If this community believes this list should go straight to FA then... so be it.

Thanks, Krenakarore TK 12:11, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • A few things:
    • Per FL Criteria #5, you should try to add images when possible, maybe pictures of the sheet music, and an image of the musician in the lead.
    • Why does #Works with opus number have an empty column "W No."? Remove it.
    • No reason for "All works are for one piano, two hands, unless otherwise stated." to be italicized.
    • Per MOS:BOLDLINKAVOID, you shouldn't link the boldface reiteration of the title. Either de-bold it, or de-link it (it should generally be linked later in the lead though).
    • Lead seems too short
    • There should be more wikilinks in the "Works with opus number" table, for example, Overture, étude, etc.
    • Why does the table suddenly end and turn into a list? It should be entirely consistent: convert all of the list into the table.
    • The list is poorly sourced.
  • (I'm not watching this page – please use {{reply to|PerfectSoundWhatever}} on reply)PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 15:32, 18 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]