Wikipedia:Peer review/List of guest stars with The Wiggles/archive1

List of guest stars with The Wiggles

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I would Like to nominate This as a featured list I Added a Lot of Stuff and Balloonman Thought I should Nominate it

Thanks, Jena I LOVE ANTHONY FIELD! (talk) 00:45, 23 September 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: While some work has gone into this, there is absolutley no way this is anywhere near ready for WP:FLC. Here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here.

• Please read WP:WIAFL and look at some featured lists for models. This has no images and zero references (the biggest single problem). Without refs it does not meet WP:V, one of the five pillars.
• The lead does not meeet WP:LEAD, nor does it meet WIAFL on leads: "It has an engaging lead section that introduces the subject, and defines the scope and inclusion criteria of the list."
• It does not provide context for the reader - some of these are just segments of one song from the TV show (Yummy Yummy) while others are videos / specials (Santa's Rockin'!). See WP:PCR
• I would ask for help on the talk page of The Wiggles, which is a FA.

Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 01:05, 24 September 2008 (UTC)