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London, Ontario[edit]

Feel as though the article is very thorough and the data is complete. It requires:

  • some sources
  • images should be either reduced or spaced out more.
  • Perhaps less listing and more prose

I feel it has the potential to be a featured article --Will2k 15:22, August 3, 2005 (UTC)

    • I agree with your comments above, including that this has FA potential. I would also add that the lead needs to be considerably expanded, as do several sections such as 'Geography,' 'Government,' and 'Economy' - SimonP 04:16, August 4, 2005 (UTC)
  • All locations can be pulled up to FA status with some hard work by the authors. There are too many lists in the page. Reduce the lists. Increase the length of the sections but make sure the page size is around 30kb. The introduction should be expanded to about thrice the current length. Its a small town so I could point you to a similar small town that's a FA: See Kalimpong. Try and emulate the sections, both in size and detail. =Nichalp «Talk»= 12:50, August 4, 2005 (UTC)
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