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Metroid Prime 2: Echoes

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to bring it to FAC soon. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 17:45, 17 November 2008 (UTC)

• Cover art image is fine, with detailed rationale and appropriate resolution, low quality. The fair use rationale for Image:Metroid Prime 2 - Echoes - HUD.png needs to be expanded; explain why it's not replaceable; does "game" mean it was a self-made screenshot? If so, specify, et al. Given the weak rationale, caption text, and article content on multiplayer, I don't see how Image:Metroid Prime 2 - Echoes - multiplayer.png is defensible per WP:NFCC. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ^(talk) 18:34, 17 November 2008 (UTC)

Done Gary King (talk) 19:35, 17 November 2008 (UTC)

• The format of the references look good. Due to my slow computer, I haven't been able to check the reliability of each source, so I'll try to get to that soon. –Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 18:53, 17 November 2008 (UTC)

They all look good except for the japanese game charts, is that reliable? Also, the setting and plot sections are unreferenced, which they should be. Otherwise, double check the text and get it on its way to FAC! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 01:38, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Yeah I'm not so sure about that reference myself. I removed it. The Setting and Plot sections don't need to be referenced. Gary King (talk) 01:56, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

It's always nice to source them if possible though. Generally if it's just transcripts citations I don't bother, but if you have secondary sources it can't hurt to add them. Just a suggestion, not really anything beyond preference. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ^(talk) 02:04, 18 November 2008 (UTC)