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Najib Razak[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve it to the point that it is suitable for consideration as a featured article. Please give any kind of suggestions that you feel are helpful.

Thanks, Monkeyassault (talk) 05:20, 15 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Doing... This peer request is not categorized in the right section. It's not a list. Oh well. I'll take a look at this.-- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 03:50, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review

I will post points here periodically
The 1st paragraph says he came into office in 2009 2 times. This is redundant. -- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 03:55, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The lede should contain a summary of his career before he became PM.-- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 04:00, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
An "appraisal" section is completely unnecessary, especially considering it only contians info about praise from The Economist.-- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 04:05, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Summaries for "economic policy" and "foreign policy" should be presented above the subsections. That way, readers will get a general idea before going into the details.-- FutureTrillionaire (talk) 04:09, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]