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North Downs Line[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because, a number of editors have made substantial changes since it was last reviewed. I would welcome feedback on the changes and additions which would be required to bring the article up to GA status.


Thanks,

Mertbiol (talk) 04:03, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Comments by Ilse@[edit]

  • I think you should say in the first sentence that the line is "between Reading and London in the United Kingdom" or something or that meaning. – Ilse@ 15:53, 20 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • The lead section is not a (good) summary of the article, it contains information that cannot be found elsewhere in the article. See also Wikipedia:Lead section. – Ilse@ 15:56, 20 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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