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Opus Dei[edit]

Previous PR is at Wikipedia:Peer review/Opus Dei/archive1.

I think the tone of this article needs to be improved, so I'm sending this to peer review. Otherwise the content isn't too bad IMO. - Ta bu shi da yu 08:44, 18 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

  • In the top section, the 2nd paragraph seems a bit long and contains a lot of info that should probably be contained below. I would trim it some. Briancua 18:55, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a no-break space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) maybe too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per WP:SS.
  • This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
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