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Portuguese Liga

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I've listed this article for peer review to know how improve this article.

Thanks, Sdrtirs (talk) 21:40, 1 May 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: Interesting article and here are my comments to help improve it:

• The three tags at the top of the article need to be addressed first - this needs inline references (see WP:CITE and WP:V), and the external links need to meet the criteria in WP:EL. No hope of getting to GA, let alone FA without these.
• Is this a list or an article? It might make sense to split out some of the lists as separate articles and make this more detailed and prose on the league. See WP:Summary Style
• The lead needs to be expanded - see WP:LEAD
• External links such as The 2006-07 season saw an average attendance by club [3]: need to be converted to inline refs too. {{cite web}} and other cite templates may be useful here.
• A model article is often helpful for ideas - there are a large number of FA and GA articles at Wikipedia:WikiProject Football that may prove helpful.

Hope this helps, Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 04:21, 7 May 2008 (UTC)