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Premier League Manager of the Season

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it's close to being a WP:FLC. I created this very article five years ago last August, yet never had the time to put my full attention to it; I have done now. The main concern with this is prose.

Thanks, Lemonade51 (talk) 20:33, 16 December 2011 (UTC)

Comments - nice job, I seem to recall contributing a little to this too, but never quite following it to FLC.

• Refs 3 and 5 have same publisher but not same format. Added
• No mention in the lead of Ferguson being the most recent recipient. Added
• Wenger's caption doesn't need a full stop. Changed
• BBC Sport a work or a publisher?
  • I assume BBC is the publisher and BBC Sport is the work?
• I don't see where in ref 9 I can see Fergie's wins.
  • There must have been a server error on the website yesterday as I too couldn't get access to any manager profiles, it just redirected to a blank page. I checked this morning and it works now. — Lemonade51 (talk) 14:15, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 17:26, 18 December 2011 (UTC)