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Ramprasad Sen

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I've listed this article for peer review because the article has undergone expansion.

Thanks, Nvineeth (talk) 08:21, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

• I don't think File:Ramprasad-sen-shyama-sangeet.jpg has an appropriate fair use rationale, a music cover is not fair use in the article. There must be another image or statue in the world that can be used.
• Death needs a date
• I could not find a distinction between the historical life and legends of Sen in the Biography section, Can the legends be seperated from biography?
• I see an inconsistent use of IAST. Most readers may think Śakta and Shakta are different, as they may be unaware of IAST. If you agree, I propose removing all IAST except the poet's name in IAST at first occurence only. --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 12:58, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the peer review,

• • File:Ramprasad-sen-shyama-sangeet.jpg will be removed, I have located other images which may qualify for fair use.
  • One of the popular stories / legends in the Biography is considered actual event by the author, yes this is confusing and I will remove the attribution by double checking with the reference. Also the death related legend is needed to complete the biography. Other very popular stories which cannot be incorporated into the main biography have been separated out into another section.
  • I will also work on the IAST and make it consistent. I agree that it is confusing.

Thanks. --Nvineeth (talk) 16:47, 7 May 2009 (UTC)