Wikipedia:Peer review/Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute/archive1

Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute[edit]

I've been helping with some cleanup on this article, and I think it should eventually pass the GA nom. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Danski14 18:48, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Trebor[edit]

Tidy up the references, use the appropriate cite template to get them automatically formatted with source, title, reference date and so on.
There are a number of external links embedded in the article, which is a bit messy. Link to the Wikipedia page, or put them in External Links (or don't link at all if they're not very relevant). Done(except campus links to maps, and still could use a little tweaking)
As ridiculous as this arrangement sound - very POV. Done
The first couple of sections are good, but it becomes listy and unreferenced later on (particularly Campus) Done(references added}
The title of the last section should probably be Notable alumni Done

Pretty good, but needs a bit of a tidy-up throughout. I haven't looked at the prose in any great detail either. Trebor 19:59, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments. I worked on the citations. I agree that campus is a little listy, but am unsure of what to do, if anything. Danski14 22:48, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

As the prose elaborates on the periods of expansion, the list at the start may be unnecessary. But I was mainly referring to the lack of citations for the whole of the Campus section. Trebor 22:50, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I think I will add one or two more. Danski14 22:53, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 21:39, 21 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]