Wikipedia:Peer review/Siddha Yoga/archive1

Siddha Yoga[edit]

I think that this is a decent article that is somewhere between a start and a B class article. I would like to see it get to good article status. I think that it could benefit greatly from the insights of fellow editors. Thanks. TheRingess (talk) 01:38, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Bcasterline[edit]

The vast majority of the article is in list form, which is generally considered infirior to prose. I'd say start there. Explain the practices in greater detail, explain the causes/effects of historical events, explain the holy days, etc. -- bcasterline • talk 05:31, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the suggestions. TheRingess (talk) 06:10, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Mailer Diablo[edit]

Length of article is a major concern - I think the bulleted points under 'Practices' can be expanded into prose. Citation of sources should be in a consistent format for the references section. - Mailer Diablo 11:47, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks.TheRingess (talk) 15:38, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]